Question

【题目】学生在考试中作弊现象时有发生。假定你是高一学生李英，请根据下列要点，给某英语报社投稿反映这种现象，并呼吁广大学生停止作弊。

1.作弊的手段 2.作弊的危害 3.对作弊采取的措施

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2．文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4. 参考词汇：竞争competition 惩罚punishment

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior One student in a high school in Hubei. These days

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Yours

Li Ying

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I am a Senior One student in a high school in Hubei. These days there are always some students cheating in exams. Some of them look at each other’s papers, some refer to their textbooks or reference books, and still some just prepare pieces of paper on which are written some answers. Other students use mobile phones to get answers.

As a result, it leads to unfair competition and makes some students less confident of their studies. I think that measures must be taken to stop it. Firstly, a severe punishment should be used to prevent such a practice going on. Secondly, students should be made aware of the harm of cheating and the importance of being honest.

Finally, I hope the newspaper can do something to help students to stop cheating.

【解析】

试题分析：这是提纲类写作，这种文章一般给出要点，要点有时比较详细，也有时比较简单，难度就相对大一些，不管是哪种情况，考生要注意不能逐字逐句的翻译，而应该注意遣词造句，提高文章的语言层次，具体到本次写作，本文的话题是抽烟的危害问题，文章的要点是以提纲的形式给出来的，不是很具体，内容有：1.作弊的手段；2.作弊的危害；3.对作弊采取的措施。考生需要做的就是以提纲为中心，适当增加细节，考生要自己去发挥，使内容充实难度，这也增加了作文的难度，要求学生有很高的拓展能力，在确定写作内容后，考生要考虑的是选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。

【亮点说明】范文根据三个提纲的内容展开，内容充实，其中也不乏好的短语和句子：refer to 参考，leads to导致，As a result因此, be confident of 自信，on which 引导的定语从句， 还有范文还使用了Firstly, Secondly, Finally这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。