Question

目前，不少人在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言。就此现象，你班最近举行了一场讨论。请根据下表的提示，客观地介绍讨论的情况及你的观点。

40%的同学认为	60%的同学认为	你的观点
1．有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解 2．违背了汉语的语法规则，对学习毫无帮助	1．幽默，使语言更生动 2．有助于表达思想	1… 2. …

荒诞ridiculous

注意： 

1. 对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

2. 词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于议论文的题材，采用“三段式”文体。首先对本班就有关是否使用网络语言进行讨论的情况进行总体说明。然后对40%的学生认为是不好的，有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解it ridiculous to see or hear words，it’s hard for them to make themselves understood.同时违背了汉语的语法规则，对学习毫无帮助it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.然后对其余的学生的观点进行阐述，幽默，使语言更生动They think what they say will sound humorous，有助于表达思想it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.最后提出自己的观点，可以就自己反对或是支持的观点进行阐述。

考点：提纲类写作

点评：对于作文的写作，特别是议论文发表观点的文章是很好写的一种文体。我们平时所积累的东西，要在写作之前就回想，要将自己记得好的句型句式运用到自己的作文中，这样文章才能有东西可写，才能表达有深度，比如写作过程中多用定语从句，多用起承转合的连词，多用倒装、虚拟语气等，这些都要求学生平时积累好句式，在具体的写作中，只要句式正确，才适当增加具体的单词，这样才能以不变应万变。