题目内容
【题目】阅读下面短文, 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Preparing for the future A senior 3 student is participating special oath-taking(誓师大会)online at home. | Teaching dance online A teacher is demonstrating her dance moves for online classes due to novel coronarvirus outbreak | Supporting community's recovery A community worker bought bags of medicines for residents on lockdown in at community. |
(写作内容)
1、用30个词概括上述图片及文字内容;
2、用约120个单词结合自己经历谈谈我们学生应如何努力共战病毒。
(写作要求)
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
(评分标准)
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】In order to prevent and control the novel coronavirus-related pneumonia, teachers and students arrange all teaching activities online and communities on lockdown are offered supplies by their workers.
During this special period, as senior high students, on one hand, we should interact with teachers actively with necessary classes attended, discussing and asking questions online. To develop the spirit of independence, we must take online exams honestly .On the other hand, we should try our best not to go out ,emphasizing the importance of hygiene. When schools open , wearing masks is a must, and windows are to be opened regularly to let clean air in.
What’s more, it is a good chance to receive the education of love and life. When foreigners prefer to go to China during this disaster, we are proud of being Chinese and determine to devote ourselves to study and bring prosperity to our motherland
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于读写任务,要求考生根据所给的图片及文字内容并结合自己经历谈谈学生应如何努力共战病毒。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 概括所给的图片及文字内容。(summarize the pictures and words given)
2. 谈谈学生应如何努力共战病毒。(talk about how students should work hard to fight the virus)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
in order to; on one hand…on the other hand; interact with; try our best to; emphasize the importance of; it is a good chance to; prefer to; are proud of; determine to
第三步:连词成句
1. In order to prevent and control the novel coronavirus-related pneumonia ,teachers and students arrange all teaching activities online and communities on lockdown are offered supplies by their workers.
2. During this special period, as senior high students, on one hand, we should interact with teachers actively with necessary classes attended, discussing and asking questions online.
3. To develop the spirit of independence, we must take online exams honestly.
4. On the other hand, we should try our best not to go out, emphasizing the importance of hygiene.
5. When schools open, wearing masks is a must, and windows are to be opened regularly to let clean air in.
6. What’s more, it is a good chance to receive the education of love and life.
7. When foreigners prefer to go to China during this disaster, we are proud of being Chinese and determine to devote ourselves to study and bring prosperity to our motherland.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
第五步:润色修改