题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning there were little cooking oil left in our kitchen.So my mother asked me to go to the corner store to buy some.She told me the oil will cost 48 yuan so she gave me 50 yuan.When the shop assistant gave me the changes,I felt surprised so he handed me 52 yuan.I immediately returned him 50 yuan,say that he had made a mistake.A shop assistant,who was moved,praised for how I did.He even told me that I was a good girl and my parents would proud of me.I said with a smile that what my mother often told me honest is the best policy.
In life, we should try to combine both money and happiness together. To do this I suggest the following steps:
Consider the Importance of Simplicity(简朴)
The aim of life should not be to control as many belongings and as much wealth as possible. If you feel happiness is directly related to material belongings, you are making a mistake. We should learn to be pleased with what we have and appreciate the advantages of simplicity.
Do Not Take Money Too Seriously
Does it pain you to spend your own money—even if it is for something useful? The problem with this, however, is that if we are always unwilling to spend money, we miss the whole point of making it. We should look at money in this way: spending money enables more to come into our lives. It is no good saving a large amount of water unless we use it to produce power; similarly, it is no use accumulating savings if we feel unwilling to spend them.
Reduce Financial(财政的) Worries to the Lowest Degree
We will be happy if we can make money a small part of our lives. To be able to do this, we need to prevent creating situations of debt(负债) as getting out of debt can be difficult and stressful. If you do need to go into debt, plan ahead and find a loan(贷款) which is clear and manageable to repay. Try not to make risky investment plans, as these give you the possibility to gain more as well as to lose a lot more.
Do Not Live to Work
If you spend all your time working, you will have no opportunity to spend your money. Don't feel guilty about turning extra work down; it is also important to have a rest. It is good if we can feel pleased with work, but if we only spend time working then our lives will be short of a proper balance.
Title: Is Money 1. to Happiness?
Four steps | How to combine money with happiness properly in our life? |
2. our life | ●We shouldn't equal the aim of life with material ●Instead, we should learn to 3. what we have |
Keep a proper 4. towards money | Don't feel painful when you spend your money on necessary things, because it is 5. to accumulate savings if you don't want to spend it |
Try to reduce financial worries | ●Try not to get into debt 6. you have to ●7. risky investment plans in case of a great loss |
8. your work and rest | ●Give yourself 9. to enjoy your life as much as possible ●It is not wrong to 10. extra work to have a rest |