Question

【题目】书面表达

随着电脑和手机的普及, 有人认为使用它们与人沟通起来方便省钱, 因此写信的人会越来越少, 书信在将来会完全消失。但也有人认为书信不仅有利于传递情感, 更作为一种艺术形式而成为民族文化的一部分。你赞成哪种观点? 并陈述理由。

要求: 1. 词数120个左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯流畅。

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently we have found letter writings declining sharply in our daily communication due to the wide use of mobile phones and computers. There is no doubt that we have benefited much from these latest communication inventions. For one thing, they make it convenient for us to communicate. For another, we can never ignore the matter of money, for much will be saved when we use computers..

Despite the benefits mentioned above, we can’t deny the significance of letter writing. As we know, letters often work better than mobile phones when it comes to some sensitive feelings. Apart from this, letter writing is a body of art, relevant not only to distinctive personality but also to the culture of nation.

Therefore, in light of what’s analyzed above, letter writing will never fade out, as it is determined by its importance.

【解析】

试题分析：随着电脑和手机的普及, 有人认为使用它们与人沟通起来方便省钱, 因此写信的人会越来越少, 书信在将来会完全消失。但也有人认为书信不仅有利于传递情感, 更作为一种艺术形式而成为民族文化的一部分。你赞成哪种观点? 并陈述理由。属于观点论述型作文，首先要表达自己的观点，再陈述自己的理由。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注

【亮点说明】 There is no doubt that we have benefited much from these latest communication inventions. 宾语从句的使用，其次For one thing，For another，Despite ，Apart from ，Therefore的使用使文章条理清晰，富有逻辑，以及fade out，is determined by等固定短语的使用都为文章增色，显得文章很有档次，值得学生学习。