Question

【题目】2014年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学高三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以“How to protect ourselves in campus violence”为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：

1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注。

2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力。

3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警。

注意：1．词数120左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：增强—enhance

How to protect ourselves in campus violence

Dear friends,

This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results.

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

How to protect ourselves in campus violence

Dear friends,

This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country. As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection.

Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence. At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇发言稿，引导大家关注校园暴力事件，要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力，并简单介绍了当遭遇校园暴力时所应当采取的措施。注意观点明确，条理清晰，注意发言稿的格式，称呼和结尾的格式。时态：用一般现在时。结构上，可以先从材料给的信息入手，逐步深入分析原因。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】文章结构清楚，第一段简明扼要说明现象，及学生面对这种情况应该采取的态度与措施，第二段详细说明应该注意的地方以及正确应对危险的方法；draw attention in, take measures to, be aware of, try one’s best to, 等词组的使用使文章更生动；at first, then, at last but not least使文章条理清晰；This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. 用了非谓语结构，长短句结合，使句子更简洁明了，更连贯。