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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.


【小题1】buy改成 buying
【小题2】here改成 there
【小题3】for后面加a
【小题4】but改成 and
【小题5】去掉around
【小题6】on改成in
【小题7】was改成 were
【小题8】luggages. 改成 luggage
【小题9】friend 改成friend’ s
【小题10】feel改成 felt

解析【小题1】此处buy与前面的was构成过去进行时。
【小题2】此处应指远在杭州的朋友。
【小题3】a long holiday长假。
【小题4】bought与turned是顺承关系。
【小题5】turn to do sth转身做某事。不用加around。
【小题6】in one’s pocket在口袋中。
【小题7】was的主语是the only clothes,故改成were。
【小题8】luggage 不可数名词。
【小题9】at a friend’s在朋友家里。
【小题10】叙述的是过去的经历,应用过去式。

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Many years ago, I was travelling in the northwest of Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

                                           

forest all day, I was returning alone to the place which I had put up my tent. It was growing dark

                                       

but I was walking along a narrow path. On my right was a wide river, and on my left , thick dark

                                                                

forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

 

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

                                             

I looked to the right. In the river there was a huge crocodile waited to welcome me with its

                                               

mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

                                         

think was happened? The tiger had jumped right over me and was now in the mouth of the

  

crocodile. Believe or not!

 

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