Question

2．散步是一种良好的锻炼方式，它对我们的健康非常有益．请以"Walking to Keep Fit"为题写一篇120词左右的英语短文，介绍一下散步的好处以及你的建议．
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Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health．
我们都知道，散步是一种很好的运动方式，有利于我们的健康．
高分句型二：
It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones．
它不仅可以减少多种疾病的风险，还能使肌肉和骨头更加强壮．

解答 Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health（高分句型一）．It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones（高分句型二）．It's safer than many other ways of exercise，especially for the elderly and it's easy to do without considering rules．Besides，walking can also help us lose weight．
What should we pay attention to during the walk？First，we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so that we can relax．Second，we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficulty but still able to talk．Third，it's important to walk with our arms moving freely．And last but not least we should do it every day．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．