Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，请你根据以“老人摔倒你会扶吗?”为主题的班会调查结果及你自己的意见给《英语周报》写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：

注意：

1．总词数不少于100；

2．开头部分已写好，不计人总词数；

3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Will you help the old when they fall down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting shows that

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Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and gentlemen,

Will you help the old when they fall down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting shows that eight percent of the students think they are sure to help the old who fall on the street because saving life is the first thing. Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances. However, five percent of them hold the view that the old shouldn’t be helped. Why not? First, they lack the knowledge of first aid, not knowing how to deal with the situation. Second, they are afraid of getting into trouble.

In my opinion, we should help each other, especially the old people. To respect the old is our best traditions. Everyone will become old, and if such a case occurs to us one day, I will say I need your help. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲短文，话题为：“老人摔倒你会扶吗？”同时这也是一篇议论文，使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1.部分同学认为应该去扶，因为救死扶伤是中华美德。2.部分人认为不能扶，因为我们缺乏急救知识，反而会带来更大的问题。而且有些人因为扶人而被额讹诈。3.个人观点：应该去扶摔倒的老人。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，让整个文章成为了一个有机的整体。如However、Why not? First、Second、In my opinion 等等；同时句中还有一些高级的句式，如such a case occurs to us one day when we’re old中的定语从句when we’re old，Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances.宾语从句，five percent of them hold the view that the old shouldn’t be helped同位语从句。在以后的写作中一定要注意这些技巧的使用。