某英文报社组织题为我喜欢的英语谚语征文活动.你有意参加．请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文.内容须包括:体现该谚语含义的个人经历．①A friend in need is a friend indeed．②Where there's a will.there's a way．注意:(1)词数:120-150,(2)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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5．某英文报社组织题为"我喜欢的英语谚语"征文活动，你有意参加．请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：（1）该谚语的含义；（2）体现该谚语含义的个人经历．
①A friend in need is a friend indeed．
②Where there's a will，there's a way．
注意：
（1）词数：120-150；
（2）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称．
参考词汇：谚语 proverb．

分析本文是一篇开放式作文．从"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"和"Where there's a will，there's a way．"这两个谚语中选择一个作为话题说明自己的观点．提示的两句谚语都是熟悉的，第一句"患难见真情．"第二句"有志者事竟成"．容易把握写作要求和写作目的．
写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
写作要点：1．谚语含义；2．个人经历；3．总结．
重要短语：stick to…（坚持做某事），be determined to do（下定决心做某事），allow sb to do sth （允许某人做某事），prevent sb from doing （阻止某人做某事），achieve one's ambitions（实现抱负），fail to do sth（没能做某事），pass the exam（通过考试），give up（放弃），be frustrated （沮丧），make up one's mind to do （下定决心做某事），take the exam（参加考试），encourage sb to to do （鼓励某人做某事），forge ahead（锐意前行），bear sth in mind （记住某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．There is an old saying"Where there's a will，there's a way"，which tell us to stick to our goal．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"There is an old saying"Where there's a will，there's a way""，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．However difficult it might be，you will find a way of doing it at last．
此处是由"however+形容词+主语+谓语"引导的让步状语从句，可以理解为"No matter how difficult it might be"，主句为"you will find a way of doing it at last"．
【高分句型三】
3．I failed to pass the exam to go to my ideal high school for further study，which made me very frustrated．
此处是关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 There is an old saying"Where there's a will，there's a way"，which tell us to stick to our goal．【高分句型一】If you are really determined to do something，however difficult it might be，you will find a way of doing it at last．【高分句型二】
The point is that you must have the will if you are to succeed．（谚语含义）
If one wants to succeed，he should not allow obstacles or failures to prevent him from acting．He should learn to make his will stronger and to determine himself to achieve his ambitions．For example，When I was a 9 grader，I failed to pass the exam to go to my ideal high school for further study，which made me very frustrated．【高分句型三】At that time，I almost gave up．Thinking of my dream that I would become a teacher in the future，I made up my mind to take the exam again next year，I made it eventually．（个人经历）
Such an unforgettable experience encourages me so much to forge ahead all the way that I achieve more and more in my life because I bear it in mind that where there is a will，there is a way．（根据谚语写出总结）

点评提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．