题目内容
A mother said, “My son is always playing computer games, chatting with his friends on the net. He never has time to talk to me.”请从高中生的角度谈谈这一现象，并发表你的看法。
注意：
词数：120左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：开头已写好，不计入总词数。
With the development of science and technology, more and more students are addicted to computers.
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Possible version：
With the development of science and technology, more and more students are addicted to computers.
Many students like computer so much that they seem to develop a good relationship with the computer. When they feel depressed, instead of communicating with parents, teachers and friends around them, they tend to express their feelings and thoughts on QQs, blogs, and so on. They are seldom seen chatting with others. Thus, the relationship between people is becoming colder,
As a student, personally, I hold the view that they spend too much time online and it does harm to their activities in reality. They will be in danger of losing communication skills in real life. It is high time that we paid more attention to this phenomenon and took some measures to make a great change.
【解析】
试题分析：本文是开放作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对学生日常生活中存在的浪费现象，所以要用一般现在时。要求发表自己的看法，因此本文必须用第一人称we。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如feel depressed，does harm to, in danger of，paid more attention to等，还运用了It is high time that句型，so that的结果状语从句还有非谓语动词to make短语，to develop短语等等。
考点：开放作文
