Question

12．假如你是李华，你校英国交换生Tom在邮件中说他被Oxford University录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝派对，但你那天要参加汉语诗词（poetry）比赛，不能参加派对．请用英语给他回复邮件．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
Congratulations on your being admitted to Oxfored University!
I'm grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to to be held this Saturday evening．（高分句型一）However，much to my regret，I have to decline your kind invitation．As you know，a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening．（高分句型二）It's a great pity that I can't make it to your party．（高分句型三）But I've prepared a gift for you and hopefully you will like it．
May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你校英国交换生Tom在邮件中说他被Oxford University录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝派对，但你那天要参加汉语诗词（poetry）比赛，不能参加派对．请用英语给他回复邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Congratulations on恭喜；However然而；much to my regret令我非常遗憾的是；enjoy yourself 玩的愉快
I'm grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to to be held this Saturday evening．（高分句型一）
As you know，a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening．（高分句型二）
It's a great pity that I can't make it to your party．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
      Congratulations on your being admitted to Oxfored University!
      I'm grateful and honored to be invited to your celebration party to to be held this Saturday evening．（高分句型一）However，much to my regret，I have to decline your kind invitation．As you know，a Chinese Poetry Competition is being held in our school and I have successfully entered the final round competition，which happens to be scheduled on this Saturday and will not end until late into the evening．（高分句型二）It's a great pity that I can't make it to your party．（高分句型三）But I've prepared a gift for you and hopefully you will like it．
      May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．