Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是新华中学的高中毕业生李华，请以 Gains from Growing Pains 为题，写一篇不少于120词的英语短文。（题目已经给出，不计入字数。）

要求：1. 描述成长过程中的一件令你烦恼的事情。 2. 说说此事最终带给你的启示和收获。

Gains from Growing Pains

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Answer 1

【答案】

Growing up is not always a very enjoyable time. It means we have to work hard. As for my childhood, my parents made me learn to play the violin so I had no time to play with other friends. I got very annoyed. I hated music, just because it was what they wanted me to do. Sometimes I felt puzzled and trapped. I even didn’t understand why I was a child.

Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons, which can enrich my life. I come to realize why my parents are always pushing me along. Everybody is to experience growing pains, which are just small pains in life. A little hard work and sweat never hurt us.

If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our road to success, we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求以 Gains from Growing Pains 为题，写一篇不少于120词的英语短文。要点包括：1. 描述成长过程中的一件令你烦恼的事情。2. 说说此事最终带给你的启示和收获。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：非谓语动词做主语Growing up is not always a very enjoyable time.定语从句which can enrich my life. 及which are just small pains in life.强调句it was what they wanted me to do.宾语从句why I was a child.和why my parents are always pushing me along.及these pains are just small bumps on our road to success。puzzled and trapped, experience growing pains, on our road to success等词汇As for my childhood, Now looking back等连接词。