Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir,

I’m terrible sorry to make you disappointing for not having finished my homework in time. In fact, I had something else to do, that made me have no time for my homework.

My father was badly injured in a car accident yesterday. Hearing the news, I hurried the hospital after school. I had a busy night, but I didn't do my homework.

As what you know, I am an ordinary student in class and eager to improve your English. I find I have great difficult concentrating on my study. Would you please give me some advices? Besides, I wish you could give me more chances to practice my English in class.

I’m looking forward to hear from you early.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Sha

Answer 1

【答案】第一句 terrible改成terribly；disappointing改成disappointed

第二句 that改成which

第四句 hurried后面加上to

第五句 but改成so

第六句 去掉what；your改成my

第七句 difficult改成difficulty

第八句 advices改成advice

第九句 hear改成hearing

【解析】本文是作者给老师的一封道歉信，由于父亲住院没能完成作业，希望老师原谅并给一些建议帮助学好英语。

1.terrible改成terribly.考查副词。修饰形容词sorry用副词，此处指非常遗憾，故terrible改成terribly.

2.disappointing改成disappointed.考查形容词。disappointing “令人失望的”，常用来修饰物。disappointed“失望的”，修饰人。此处修饰you用disappointed，故disappointing改成disappointed.

3.that改成which.考查定语从句。句中是非限制性定语从句，不用that要用which引导，指代前面整个句子，故that改成which.

4. hurried后面加上to.考查介词。hurry是不及物动词，后加宾语加介词to，hurry to some place表示“匆忙去某地”，故hurried后面加上to.

5.but改成so.考查连词。句意：我一晚上很忙，所以没有做作业。前后句是因果关系，不是转折。故but改成so.

6.去掉what.考查固定短语。表示“正如你知道的”用As you know，故去掉what.

7.your改成my.考查代词。句意：我在班里是一个普通的学生，渴望提高我的英语。与主语I一致，指我的英语。故去掉what.

8.difficult改成difficulty.考查名词。做动词have的宾语，由 great修饰用名词difficulty，表示“做某事有困难”用have difficulty (in) doing sth. 故difficult改成difficulty.

9.advices改成advice.考查名词。advice表示“建议”是不可数名词，没有复数形式。故advices改成advice.

10.hear改成hearing.考查动词形式。动词短语look forward to中的to是介词，后加动词的-ing形式作宾语，故hear改成hearing.