Question

【题目】你校英文报“好人好事”栏目正面向全体学生征稿。请根据以下三幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文，记述你和朋友帮助一位老人的过程并投稿。

注意：词数100左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：ambulance（n. 救护车） a sense of responsibility（责任感）

It was a Sunday afternoon.__________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】It was a Sunday afternoon. I was playing in the park with my friend when I saw an old man lying on the ground. I tried to help him stand up, but he couldn't move and seemed in pain. Not knowing what to do, I asked my friend to call an ambulance. Soon the ambulance arrived. We helped carry the old man on the ambulance. The doctor praised us for what we did, which made us very happy.

In my opinion，everyone of us should have a sense of responsibility and a caring heart. Whenever we see anyone in need of help, we should give them a hand without hesitation.

【解析】这是一篇看图作文。根据题干可知：你校英文报“好人好事”栏目正面向全体学生征稿。要求根据以下三幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇短文，记述你和朋友帮助一位老人的过程并投稿。

同时要注意以下几点：

1.根据先后顺序，准确将每张图的意思表达出来。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3.注意语气，贴近主题“好人好事”，最后应做出总结性言辞。

【范文亮点】

1.文章层次分明，准确地将图片含义表达了出来，语言生动流畅。

2.文章运用了" In my opinion ，in need of，without hesitation"等高分词语，此外，还运用了“I was playing in the park with my friend when I saw an old man lying on the ground.”等状语从句，＂The doctor praised us for what we did, which made us very happy.＂等非限制性定语从句。