题目内容
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Nowadays,there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering.It's well-known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return.It's as the Spirit of Lei Feng.However,knowing this,there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend.For instance,the 2008Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers.They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics.Moreover,we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them.Even though some people's career is a volunteer.They are ready to helping others.Although the volunteers are much more common,we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society.
分析 本文主要介绍志愿者的工作.他们不求社会的回报为社会做出了贡献,我们应当感谢他们的工作.
解答 Nowadays,there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering.It's well-known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return.It's as the Spirit of Lei Feng.However,knowing this,there are still many people∧would like to devote themselves to this trend.For instance,the 2008Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers.They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics.Moreover,we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them.Even though some people's career is a volunteer.They are ready to helping others.Although the volunteers are much more common,we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society.
详解:
1.a改为an 考查冠词.a number of意为"许多的",因为increasing是以元音音素开头的,冠词用an.
2.something改为nothing 考查代词.根据句意:志愿者就是不求社会的回报.把something改成nothing.
3.as改为like 考查介词.根据句意:它像雷锋精神一样.like意为"像…一样",as意为"作为".此处应是:像…一样.
4.加who 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词people指人,在从句中作主语,用关系代词who.
5.such改为so 考查词语用法.如果such后边的名词前由many、much、few、little等词所修饰的话,则不用 such而用so.
6.make改为made 考查动词时态.根据常识the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games已发生,要用一般过去时态.
7.warm改为warmth 考查名词.根据句意:给老年人带来温暖.用名词作宾语.
8.去掉though 考查词语用法.根据句意:甚至一些人的事业就是一名志愿者.此处不是"即使"之意,though是多余的,要去掉.
9.helping改为help 考查词语用法.be ready to do sth.意为"准备做某事",to后接动词原形.
10.they改为them 考查代词.thank是及物动词,后接代词宾格them.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
After that,Nasrudin turned to the (32)D man and shouted,"Fool!Why didn't you live with such nice feelings all the days when you were (33)D and fully alive?"With that,Nasrudin left the (34)B.The old man (35)A and said,"At last I've heard the (36)C.It is a blessing to (37)D having heard the truth."The old man died (38)D.
What about the others?They returned to their (39)B business of life and continued as they always had been.And Nasrudin?When he returned to his (40)A just outside the old man's house,the donkey made a long high sound,"Hee-haw!Hee-haw!"Nasrudin said,"Yes,I know…You're right…Live well;die well…"
21.A.called on | B.looked after | C.cared about | D.depended on |
22.A.offered | B.bought | C.kept | D.expressed |
23.A.Before | B.As | C.Because | D.Although |
24.A.face | B.leg | C.hand | D.head |
25.A.another | B.other | C.all | D.some |
26.A.possible | B.necessary | C.polite | D.kind |
27.A.visited | B.invited | C.bothered | D.employed |
28.A.comforted | B.helped | C.observed | D.blamed |
29.A.raised | B.lent | C.washed | D.hid |
30.A.forced | B.turned | C.ordered | D.changed |
31.A.need | B.mood | C.health | D.position |
32.A.living | B.visiting | C.coming | D.dying |
33.A.safe | B.important | C.weak | D.energetic |
34.A.party | B.scene | C.meeting | D.conference |
35.A.smiled | B.appeared | C.screamed | D.jumped |
36.A.message | B.news | C.truth | D.fact |
37.A.stay | B.work | C.sleep | D.die |
38.A.secretly | B.proudly | C.sadly | D.peacefully |
39.A.strange | B.normal | C.important | D.perfect |
40.A.donkey | B.car | C.assistant | D.wife |
A. | less than | B. | no more than | C. | more than | D. | not more than |
A. | create | B. | grow | C. | settle | D. | develop |
A. | work on | B. | work at | C. | work out | D. | work for |