Question

请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文，

某英语报社举办“ I like music”的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

1音乐教会我学会欣赏2音乐充实我的生活；3音乐帮助我放松

注意：1词数100左右2可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅3参考词汇：充实enrich

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Why I like music

My greatest hobby is listening to music. Now let me tell you why I like music so much. First of all , as an important from of art, music  teaches me what is good  and beautiful, and it helps me learn to enjoy the beauty. Secondly, music enriches my life . With an MP3player, I can listen to music wherever I go , which makes my life more colorful. Thirdly, music helps me feel relaxed. Wherever I feel the pressure, I turn to music to relax myself. In a word, music does a lot of good to me and I like it more and more.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。