题目内容
7.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Mark Twain liked to play jokes in his friends.One day one of his friends lost his wallet and asked Mark pay the train fare for him."But I haven't got enough money to pay both your fare or mine,"Mark said.Then he adds,"We can get on the train first and when the conductor comes to check ticket,you hide under my seat."Late,however,when the conductor(检票员) came to check tickets,Mark gave him two more tickets.Then he said in the loud voice,"My friend is a strange man.When he travels on a train,he prefers to lying on the floor under the seat."Of course many passengers laughed at his poorly friend.
分析 Mark Twain 喜欢与别人开玩笑.一天他的一个朋友钱包丢了,要求他帮忙付车票钱,Mark告诉朋友他的钱不够,但是可以先上车,查票时让朋友藏在座位底下.后来列车员过来查票,Mark却拿出了两张票,并大声说:"我的朋友很奇怪,坐车时喜欢躺在座位下的地板上".结果引起很多乘客的大笑.
解答 Mark Twain liked to play jokes in his friends.One day one of his friends lost his wallet and asked Mark∧pay the train fare for him."But I haven't got enough money to pay both your fare or mine,"Mark said.Then he adds,"We can get on the train first and when the conductor comes to check ticket,you hide under my seat."Late,however,when the conductor(检票员) came to check tickets,Mark gave him two more tickets.Then he said in the loud voice,"My friend is a strange man.When he travels on a train,he prefers to lying on the floor under the seat."Of course many passengers laughed at his poorly friend.
详解:
1.in改为on;考查固定搭配,play jokes on sb是固定搭配,意为"跟别人开玩笑".
2.pay前面加to;考查动词的不定式,ask sb to do sth是固定用法,意为"要求某人干某事".
3.or改为and;考查连词,此处用and构成固定短语"both…and",意为"两者都…".
4.adds改为added;考查动词的时态,本文讲的是过去发生的事情,故用一般过去时.
5.ticket改为tickets;考查名词的单复数,ticket是可数名词,结合语境分析,这里列车员检查的是所有乘客的票,故用复数形式.
6.Late改为Later;考查形近单词,late意为"晚的,迟到",later意为"后来,随后",结合语境分析句意此处应用later.
7.去掉more;考查句意,结合上下文分词句意为"当列车员过来检票时,Mark给了他两张票",此处没有表示"另外"的意思,故把more去掉.
8.the改为a;考查冠词,in a loud voice 是固定短语,意为"大声,用响亮的声音".
9.lying改为lie;考查动词,prefer to do是固定用法,意为"喜欢做…",所以此处要用动词原形lie.
10 poorly改为poor;考查形容词,此处用形容词poor作定语,修饰名词friend.
点评 短文改错首先要通读全文,整体理解短文的中心思想,然后根据短文讲述的事情确定文章的基本时态,再运用基础语言知识从时态,语态,句式结构,固定短语等方面彻底进行分析,以便尽快找出短文的错误所在并加以修改.
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