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第五部分改错（满分10分）

Dear sir,

I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be success, but finally I failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I found a company that was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for details. I wanted to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward to receive your reply.

Yours

Li Ming

【答案】

Dear sir,

I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be ^ success, but eventually

( 删除a 或把work 改成job) (插入a或把success改成successful)

I failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the

Because about

hot weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself

knew myself后加as

someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I

alone capable

found a company that was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for details. I wanted

to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward

but

to receive your reply.

receiving

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Dear sir,

Yours

Li Ming

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