Question

13．假定你是李华．过去三年一直利用业余时间打工，你想在高考后去一家国际书店（Global Books）兼职．请给书店经理Ms Jenkins写一份英文短信．
要点包括：
1．有客户服务经验；
2．有很强的语言、人际交流和组织技能；
3．希望通过在Global Books的工作掌握更多技能．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已写好．
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I would like to apply for the bookshop assistant position with Global Books．
I am a high school student doing part-time work，so I have developed strong interpersonal skills as a result of over three years of experience in customer service roles．It also equips me with strong communication skills and good organizational skills．My time management skills are further evident in my ability to balance full-lime study and part-time work．
I'm always eager to seek new responsibilities and learn new skills in the workplace．I am self-motivated and enjoy taking initiative to achieve better results for the business．I also enjoy a challenge，and am keen to use my skills and experience at Global Books．
I would love the opportunity to discuss my application with you in further detail，and look forward to hearing from you．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这事一封申请信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：1．提出申请；2．自己的优势：有客户服务经验；有很强的语言、人际交流和组织技能；3．希望通过在Global Books的工作掌握更多技能；4．表达期盼．
高分句型：
1．I am a high school student doing part-time work，so I have developed strong interpersonal skills as a result of over three years of experience in customer service roles．句子里 doing part-time work做a high school student 的定语；interpersonal skills 表示"人际交往技能"；as a result of表示"由于"．
我是一个做过兼职的高中生，由于三年的客户服务经经历，我已经形成了很强的人际交往技能．
2．I also enjoy a challenge，and am keen to use my skills and experience at Global Books．句子里challenge表示"挑战"；am keen to 表示"非常想做某事"．
我也喜欢挑战，非常想在国际书店运用自己的技能和经验．

解答 Dear Ms Jenkins，
      I would like to apply for the bookshop assistant position with Global Books．（提出申请）
     I am a high school student doing part-time work，so I have developed strong interpersonal skills as a result of over three years of experience in customer service roles．【高分句型一】It also equips me with strong communication skills and good organizational skills．My time management skills are further evident in my ability to balance full-lime study and part-time work．（自己的优势：有客户服务经验；有很强的语言、人际交流和组织技能）
      I'm always eager to seek new responsibilities and learn new skills in the workplace．I am self-motivated and enjoy taking initiative to achieve better results for the business．I also enjoy a challenge，and am keen to use my skills and experience at Global Books．【高分句型二】（希望通过在Global Books的工作掌握更多技能．）
     I would love the opportunity to discuss my application with you in further detail，and look forward to hearing from you．（表达期盼）
    Your sincerely，
      Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类英语作文具备以下特点：
1、题材涉及广泛，如人物介绍、地点介绍、新闻报道、生活话题及社会热门话题，试题设计真实性高，符合学生的认知水平，其中学校生活类题材占比例最大．体裁多种多样，包括应用文（书信、日记、通知、发言稿、寻物及招领启事等）、说明文、记叙文、议论文等．
2、提纲类作文提示点一目了然，需要表达的信息一览无余．答题时无须花过多的时间去揣摩写作内容，要点一般不会遗漏．
3、提纲类作文中通常是以不完整的汉语句子（包括术语或概括性的短语）作为提示形式出现．这样既能够让考生获得命题人所要求的信息，又留给考生一定的发挥空间，因而要求考生具备很强的语言驾驭能力和语篇整合能力．