Question

【题目】假如你是李华，寒假参加了社会实践活动。你想与朋友Peter分享本次经历，请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇E-mail.

工作地点	一家德克士(Dicos)快餐店
工作时间	四个星期，每天7小时
工作情况	当保洁员，工作辛苦且枯燥，每天要起早贪黑地工作，差点中途放弃
你的体会	遇到了一些没预料到的困难，认识到了劳动(labor)的意义……

注意: 1. 邮件开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

2. 不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，词数100左右。

3. 提示词：保洁员(cleaner) 劳动(labor)

Dear Peter,

Hi, I had an opportunity to take part in social practice last winter vacation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Hi, I had an opportunity to take part in social practice last winter vacation.

During the winter holiday，I figured I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home，so I got a job at Dicos, a fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner．I worked seven hours a day for four weeks. Hard and boring, the job seemed endless，which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up half way．After all，I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

I met with a lot of unexpected difficulties in the work，but they helped me understand better what labor means．I suppose it is really a successful experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】根据题目要求你写一封信与朋友Peter分享社会实践活动，题目中明确要求有：工作时间；工作地点；工作情况；自己体会。

首先，同学们要点明写信目的；然后要明确地指出社会实践的内容；最后表达自己社会实践的体会等等。同学们要能适当把握四个部分的内容，使文章内容相协调，使用恰当的连接词，使语义连贯，连接顺畅。

【范文亮点】

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