Question

【题目】面对繁重的学业负担，很多学生出现了不同程度的心理和身体方面的不适。鉴于此种情况，中学生应该学会放松。假如你是中学生李华，请以How to relax ourselves为题写一篇文章给校英语报投稿。

内容包括：1.为什么要学会自我放松；

2.自我放松的途径（如看电视，上网，体育锻炼，旅游等）；

3.你更喜欢哪种自我放松方式及原因。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

How to Relax Ourselves

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Relax Ourselves

Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us studentsoften feel tired both psychologically and mentally. If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on our life and study. In view of this, we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves. As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.

As for me, I prefer surfing the Internet in my spare time. For one thing, the Internet provides me with a wide range of activities for relaxation. Sometimes I keep track of the latest news as an entertainment. I also play computer games to relax myself. For another, the Internet gives me easy access to making friends with people at home and abroad. Furthermore, the vivid pictures on the Internet can greatly refresh me when I feel tired.

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给《21世纪英语报》写一篇文章，描述中学生面对繁重的课业负担，自我放松的原因，途径以及自己喜欢的放松方式和原因。文章给出了提纲。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：包含as引导定语从句的句子As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.；As for me, I prefer surfing the Internet in my spare time.就我而言，我更喜欢空闲时间上网。2.使用了过渡词语：For one thing，For another， Furthermore等。3.使用了重要短语：are supposed to应该；In view of this鉴于此；As for me就我而言；provides sb with给某人提供。