题目内容
【题目】书面表达
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是寻找身边的榜样。请根据下列要求完成短文。
1.身边的榜样是谁;
2.主要事迹/表现。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Among the students around me , Li Hua is such an outstanding example that I should follow.
As a senior,he has been studying hard and doing well in every subject. In addition, as a warm-hearted person he always does what he can to help those in trouble. Whatever he does, he makes every effort to do it well. Even though he meets with various difficulties, he never give up . in his daily life,he always makes people aware of the importance of protecting the environment. In his opinion every action on protecting the environment makes a big difference.
Such is Li Hua, a student with lots of good qualities. We can learn so many things from him.
【解析】
试题分析:考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语do well in 在某方面做得好;in trouble处在困难中;make effort to do 努力去做某事;make sb aware of 使某人意识到;In addition, as a warm-hearted person he always does what he can to help those in trouble.这个句子中what he can做do的宾语从句;Whatever he does, he makes every effort to do it well这个句子whatever引导让步状语从句;