Question

10．I am currently on my year abroad in Germany as part of my high school course．From the beginning of my time here，I've had the chance to meet new people and make lots of new friends．As a girl，I have been open and friendly and have made some great friends in this country．Friends are so important to me that I can't imagine a life without them．
Next week my best friend is moving to Spain with his parents．He doesn't want to leave but has to．All his friends，especially me，don't want him to leave and I feel so bad inside．I just can't stop myself from feeling this way．
We have to say goodbye no matter how we feel，and my group of friends and I will have a farewell party for him．We've made him an album with photos and memories of his time here so that he could take it with him and wouldn't forget us!We wish that he would have a wonderful time and make lots of new friends after settling into his new home．
1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容；
2、以约120词讲述一次"你与好朋友离别"的经历，内容包括：
（1）你与好友为何离别？
（2）离别时的情景；
（3）你如何看待朋友间的离别？
1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：say goodbye to sb（与某人说再见），remind me of sth（提醒某人某事），hug sb（拥抱某人），exchange sth（交换某事），leave school（毕业），be full of （装满…，充满…），take it easy（不急，放松，从容），after all（毕竟），keep in contact（保持联系），have chances to do （由机会做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．  The writer enjoys friendship in Germany but has to say goodbye to her best friend since he's moving to Spain，which makes her sad．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．Unwillingly，I had to say goodbye to her，who I wouldn't see for a long time．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的非限制性从句，关系代词"who"在从句中作宾语，指代前面主句中的"her"．
【高分句型三】
2．Life is full of meetings and partings and there are moments when good friends have to part．
此处是由关系副词"when"引导的定语从句，先行词为"moments"．

解答 The writer enjoys friendship in Germany but has to say goodbye to her best friend since he's moving to Spain，which makes her sad．【高分句型一】However，she can only give him best wishes．（概括）
This reminds me of a similar experience of leaving my best friend Jane when we finished our study at a junior school in another province．I would move to this city with my parents and continue my study in high school here．Unwillingly，I had to say goodbye to her，who I wouldn't see for a long time．【高分句型二】（与好友为何离别）
After the graduation ceremony，we hugged each other，exchanged small gifts，and finally said goodbye．But we decided that we would go to the same university after leaving high school．（离别时的情景）
Life is full of meetings and partings and there are moments when good friends have to part，【高分句型三】so we should take it easy while parting friends．After all，there are many ways for us to keep in contact and we have chances to meet again in the future．（个人观点：如何看待朋友间的离别）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．