题目内容
14.下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在该句下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy.She was upsetting about the news herself.In the spring,Maria's mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach.Since then,Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together.By the time August had arrived,Maria's mother had total forgotten her promise.When Maria reminded her,she said that she was sorry but that it wouldn't be enough room for Freddy because Maria's cousin,Theresa,would be going to the shore with them.Now Freddy was in his way to Maria's house.
分析 Maria和Freddy是好朋友,Maria家有一次旅行,说好和Freddy一起去的,但是这个机会却被Maria的表弟Theresa抢走了.
解答 Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy.She was upsetting about the news herself.
In the spring,Maria's mother had said Maria might be allowed∧bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach.
Since then,Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together.By the time August
had arrived,Maria's mother had total forgotten her promise.When Maria reminded her,she said that she was sorry but that
it wouldn't be enough room for Freddy because Maria's cousin,Theresa,would be going to the shore with them.
Now Freddy was in his way to Maria's house.
详解:
1.a改成-the 考查冠词. Maria害怕把这个坏消息告诉Freddy.这里是特指,故把a改成-the.
2.upsetting改成upset 考查形容词. upset苦恼的,是形容词,故把upsetting改成upset.
3.在allowed后加to 考查不定式. allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事,故在allowed后加to.
4.family改成family's 考查所有格. the family's two-week vacation一家人的两周旅行,故把family改成family's.
5.and改成but 考查连词.nothing but除了,他们除了计划要做的事情之外什么也不做.故把and改成but.
6.thing改成things考查名词单复数. al修饰可数名词复数,故把thing改成things.
7.去掉By the time中的had 考查时态.By the time到…时候,根据主句用的过去完成时可知,从句用过去时,故去掉By the time中的had.
8.total改成totally 考查副词. 修饰动词forgotten应该用副词,故把total改成totally.
9.it改成 there 考查固定句式.there be有…,没有足够的空间给Freddy,故把it改成 there.
10.in改成on 考查介词搭配. 现在,Freddy正在去Maria的房子的路上,on one's way to…在去…的路上.故把in改成on.
点评 通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,尤其是有的行文逻辑方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误.在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行分句改错.
A. | building up | B. | setting up | C. | blowing up | D. | making up |