Question

9．近期，山西某校组织高二学生进行了一场讨论．主题是：高三年要不要集中进行晚自习．根据下图提供的信息，写一篇120字左右的英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点．

开头部分已给出，不计入总词数．
Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3students in our school．The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not．Here is the result according to the survey．
注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开关已为你写好，不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本文是"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章图表和所给提示信息写一篇短文，阐述山西某校高二学生进行的有关"高三年要不要集中进行晚自习"的讨论．既是图表作文又是提纲类作文．
写作要点：1．引出话题；2.60%的学生的观点；3.25%的学生的观点 4.15%的学生的观点．
写作时时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：a heated discussion（热烈讨论），be willing to do（愿意做某事），according to（根据），do well in（在…方面做得好），with the help of sb（在某人的帮助之下），concentrate on （集中于），with company of sb （在某人的陪伴之下），prefer to do （更喜欢做某事），get disturbed by （被…干扰），on one's way home（在某人回家的路上），at the same time （同时），an answer to the question（问题的答案），promise sb sth（许诺某人某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not．
此处是由连接词"whether…or not"引导的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
2．There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，关系代词"who"在从句中作主语，先行词为"the students"．
【高分句型三】
3．They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if asked to．
此处是"if条件状语从句中的省略"，可以理解为"If they are asked to（go to school）"

解答 Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school．The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not．【高分句型一】Here is the result according to the survey．（引出话题）
        60 percent of the students think it's a good idea to have the evening self-study at school．They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers．Also，they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates．（60%的学生的观点）
        There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home．【高分句型二】They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone．（25%的学生的观点）
At the same time，still 15 percent of the students don't have a clear answer to the question．They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if asked to．【高分句型三】But they promise they can also do well at home．（15%的学生的观点）

点评 图表作文要求将图表所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当拓展并发挥想象．首先要对图表的内容进行描述，然后围绕图表的信息进行说明或议论．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．