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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

How is everything going with you? As for me, I have a great news to share—I will finally get to be in a book!

Last Saturday morning, Dad and I were eating breakfast while we heard a knock on the door. I rushed to open the door. It was our neighbor Miss Lydia, that draws pictures for children’s books. Miss Lydia greeted me with a smile, looking happily to see me. Remembering my best manner, I said, “Hello, Miss Lydia. Won’t you come in?” Miss Lydia came in, sitting at the breakfast table, and said to my dad that he would like both of us to be her models in one of her books! I jumped off my chair and run to give Miss Lydia a big hug.

I hope my first model experience will be both enjoyable or unforgettable. I’m looking forward to hearing you soon.

【答案】

【1】第二句a 去掉

【2】while—when

【3】that—who

【4】happily—happy

【5】manner—manners

【6】sitting—sat

【7】he---she

【8】run—ran

【9】or—and

【10】you 前加from

【解析】

试题分析:作者第一次为邻居Miss Lydia当模特的经历。

【1】第二句a 去掉 news是不可数名词,故第二句a 去掉。

【2】while—when 固定句式:was/were doing sth. when 主语+一般过去时态--,正在做某事---,这时候---,故把while—when。

【3】that—who Miss Lydia是先行词,后面用who引导非限制性定语从句,故把that—who。

【4】happily—happy look看起来(连系动词),后面用形容词作表语,故把happily—happy。

【5】manner—manners句意:记得我最好的礼貌。故把manner—manners。

【6】sitting—sat 此处是并列谓语,故把sitting—sat。

【7】he---she 根据前面的Miss Lydia,可知把he---she。

【8】run—ran 此处是并列谓语,故把run—ran。

【9】or—and 固定词组:both---and---,两个都---。故把or—and

【10】you 前加from 固定词组:hear from收到某人的来信,故在you 前加from。

【知识拓展】

when后的从句谓语动词既可是延续性动词,也可是短暂性动词,而且还可作并列连词,译为“这时”.但以下句型一定用when,作并列连词:

句型A:be about to do…when…正要做…这时(发生另一事)

句型B:was/were doing…when…正在…这时(发生另一事)

句型C:had done…when…刚要做…这时(发生另一事)

1.We were about to set out when it began to rain.我们刚要出发天突然下雨了.

2.He had hardly sat down when his mobile rang.他刚一坐下手机就响了.

3.I was walking along the bank of the river when I fell into it.我正沿河岸散步突然掉进水里.

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