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16．假定你是李华．你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员．请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
   1．球队活动；
   2．报名方式及截止日期．
注意：
   1．词数100左右；
   2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Eric，
I am Li Hua．I'm writing to inform you that my school's table tennis team is recruiting new players．（高分句型一）I know you are good at playing Ping pong，so I want to invite you to join the team and to be a member of it．
Table tennis is very popular with students in our school，and because our school table tennis equipment is perfect，our school often holds many big activities，for example，"Harmonious Cup"table tennis match and middle school table tennis championship．（高分句型二）If you join the team，you can get systematic training and compete with high level players in the events．We hope you will accept our invitation．You can download the registration form our school website and fill it out and send it to the school email box．Registration deadline is July 31，2017．If you have any questions，please write to me．
I am looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes，
yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息，假定你是李华．你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员．请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1．球队活动；2．报名方式及截止日期．基本时态为一般将来时，人称以第一、二人称为主．重要短语：be good at  …（擅长…），invite sb to do sth（邀请某人做某事），be popular with  （受…欢迎），compete with（与…竞争），accept our invitation（接受我们的邀请），look forward to sth/doing （期望某事/做某事），write to sb（写信给某人）．
 I am Li Hua．I'm writing to inform you that my school's table tennis team is recruiting new players．（高分句型一）
…because our school table tennis equipment is perfect，our school often holds many big activities，for example，"Harmonious Cup"table tennis match and middle school table tennis championship．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Eric，
       I am Li Hua．I'm writing to inform you that my school's table tennis team is recruiting new players．（高分句型一）I know you are good at playing Ping pong，so I want to invite you to join the team and to be a member of it．
       Table tennis is very popular with students in our school，and because our school table tennis equipment is perfect，our school often holds many big activities，for example，"Harmonious Cup"table tennis match and middle school table tennis championship．（高分句型二）If you join the team，you can get systematic training and compete with high level players in the events．We hope you will accept our invitation．You can download the registration form our school website and fill it out and send it to the school email box．Registration deadline is July 31，2017．If you have any questions，please write to me．
       I am looking forward to your reply．
       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．