题目内容
6.没有感恩就没有真正的美德( No thanksgiving would be no virtue).如今社会上一些人缺乏感恩之心,少数人甚至在父母年老体弱时都不愿意赡养.请结合自己的实际,谈几点父母值得你感恩的地方,以及将来你会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩.
1.短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数.
2.100词左右.(感恩:thanksgiving)
Not only do our parents give us life,but they also give us endless love and support,always sharing our happiness and sorrow.
I'm very grateful to my parents.They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me.I still remember once I was seriously ill,they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I'm a Senior High School student.Luckily for me,my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore,they give me enough personal space,which I appreciate so much.What I should do now is to study hard.When I grow up,I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life..
分析 这是一篇关于感恩父母的作文.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一提出话题;二父母值得感恩的地方;三报答父母的养育之恩.高分句型:1.Luckily for me,my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words.句子里 stressful condition 表示"有压力的状态";communicate with 表示"和某人交流"; encouraging words表示"鼓励性的语言".幸运的是,我的父母理解我现在有压力的状态,经常用鼓励性的语言和我交流.2.Furthermore,they give me enough personal space,which I appreciate so much.句子里which引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句they give me enough personal space.此外,我很感激他们给了我足够的私人空间.
解答 Not only do our parents give us life,but they also give us endless love and support,always sharing our happiness and sorrow.I'm very grateful to my parents.They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me.(提出感恩父母的话题)I still remember once I was seriously ill,they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I'm a Senior High School student.Luckily for me,my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words.【高分句型一】Furthermore,they give me enough personal space,which I appreciate so much.【高分句型二】hat I should do now is to study hard.(父母值得感恩的地方)When I grow up,I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.(报答父母的养育之恩)
点评 考查提纲类作文.书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上,也反映在书面形式上.一定要注意单词拼写正确,书写规范,字迹工整,卷面力求整洁,正确使用标点符号,使别人看起来耳目一新,具有整体美感,从而提高自己的得分档
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