Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高一（1）班的学生李华。上周末你们班参加了高中第一次学校运动会。请根据以下各图的先后顺序，用英语为校刊写一篇短文，介绍你班参与的全过程。词数不少于60。文章开头已给出。

参考词汇：开幕式 opening parade; 看台 stand

Last weekend, we joined in our first sports meeting in high school.___________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Last weekend, we joined in our first sports meeting in high school.

It started with opening parade. All of us walked in step, following our monitor who was holding our class flag. Our parade took on the shape of the letter “V”, indicating victory. Everybody was in high spirits.

After the parade, the competition began, which was the most exciting part. My classmates got involved in various events, such as high jump and long jump. What was the most exciting event was the relay race. Their performance left us a deep impression. Meanwhile, on the stand my classmates and I were trying our best to encourage them. We applauded and cheered for the athletes. Some were raising their cameras to capture the exciting moments.

Finally, the result was announced. To our delight, our class won the second place. Our efforts paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together, with a smile on everybody’s face.

I believe this sports meeting will remain a precious memory for all of us. (170)

【解析】试题分析：

本文是看图写作，根据图片顺序介绍上周末你们班参加了高中第一次学校运动会的全过程。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。按顺序完整陈述四幅图的情景，并进行适当扩充。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般过去时为主（上周的运动会）。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：介绍开幕式（V字队形）；第二部分：比赛过程和（运动员比赛和拉拉队的欢呼）；第三部分：比赛结果（获奖以及结束语）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：现在分词following做伴随状语以及定语从句All of us walked in step, following our monitor who was holding our class flag.；非限制性定语从句After the parade, the competition began, which was the most exciting part.；主语从句What was the most exciting event was the relay race.；独立结构的使用Cup in hand, we took a picture together, with a smile on everybody’s face.。2.使用了过渡词语：Meanwhile ，Finally等。3.使用了重要短语：take on呈现，承担，雇佣；try one’s best to尽最大的努力；pay off取的成功，解雇，付清。