假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有十处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除.或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线.在该词下面写出改正后的词. 注意:每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。

One day I went shopping at a gift shop in Shanghai. I was greatly interesting and I lost me in beautiful goods. After I paid for that I had bought, I left my handbag on the counter. There was about two thousands yuan in it. I had already walked out of the shop while a young shop assistant walked up to me in my handbag. He insisted on my check it. I opened the handbag and found nothing losing. I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 yuan, he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless act on that day.

【答案】

One day I went shopping at a gift shop in Shanghai. I was greatly interesting（改为interested）（主语是人的时候用interested） and I lost me (改为myself)(固定词组lose oneself in使自己迷失在…中) in beautiful goods. After I paid for that (改为what)（宾语从句的引导词，并在句中作宾语） I had bought, I left my handbag on the counter. There was about two thousands (改为thousand)（确定数词后面的量词用单数） yuan in it. I had already walked out of the shop while (改为when)（while后面的动词应该是延续性的动词，而walk是短暂性动词） a young shop assistant walked up to me in (with) my handbag. He insisted on my check (改为checking)（On后面要接动名词） it. I opened the handbag and found nothing losing（形容词lost宾语补足语） (改为lost). I thanked him and offered him a reward of 100 yuan, (加上but)(上下文存在转折关系) he refused to take anything. I was deeply moved by his selfless act on (去掉on)（on这里是多余的） that day.

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