Question

【题目】书面表达（共35分）

近来中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受关注。社会﹑学校﹑家长以及学生自己应该一起努力以确保学生的安全。请根据下列要点写一篇120字左右的短文，并谈谈你的具体想法。

自我保护的重要性	1. 有了安全才能实现目标，达成家长的期望；
	2. 保护好自己才能健康发展，家庭幸福；
	3. 有助于构建和谐社会。
如何保护自己	1. 增强安全意思，避免潜在危险；
	2. 遇事淡定，寻求帮助；

Recently, it has been a great public concern that the students lack self-protection awareness. Society, school, parents and especially students should work together to ensure students’ security.

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Answer 1

【答案】

There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great importance to us all. To begin with, without security, we can achieve nothing and can’t live up to parents’ expectations. Besides, protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development, which is linked with the happiness of each family. What’s more, it’s helpful to build a more harmonious society.

From my point of view, in order to protect us students well, we should strengthen our awareness of security, avoiding being involved in potential danger. Furthermore, we ought to calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help. It’s only by the combined efforts of every side that we can live and study harmoniously.

【解析】本文是材料作文，材料较为明确简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，所有要点都是对客观事实的描述所以要用一般现在时。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。