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11．假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Mr．Smith给你发电子邮件，请你下周末带领他进行一次近郊游．请你用英语给他回封电子邮件，要点如下：
1．乐意接受他的请求；
2．你计划带他去游览东郊广灵湖；
3．出游时间和所需准备等相关信息．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．为使行文连贯，可根据内容适当增加细节．
 3．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Smith，
It's my pleasure to be asked to act as your guide to take a short trip on next weekend．（高分句型一）And now I am writing to tell you the details as follows．
I'll plan a wonderful and well-organized trip for you to the Guangling Lake，in the eastern suburb，not far from the downtown．（高分句型二）You will be amazed at the scenery there．In terms of the meeting time，8 o'clock on the morning of Saturday will be fine．I will be waiting for you at the school gate then．Remember not to take too many things．Just a bottle of water，some kinds of food，a cap and a pair of sunglasses will be enough．I believe you will enjoy the trip and we'll have a good day together．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to seeing you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Mr．Smith给你发电子邮件，请你下周末带领他进行一次近郊游．请你用英语给他回封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：乐意接受他的请求；你计划带他去游览东郊广灵湖；出游时间和所需准备等相关信息   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take a short trip短途旅行； far from 远离；be amazed at对…吃惊；In terms of 关于；have a good day过得愉快；
It's my pleasure to be asked to act as your guide to take a short trip on next weekend．（高分句型一）
I'll plan a wonderful and well-organized trip for you to the Guangling Lake，in the eastern suburb，not far from the downtown．（高分句型二）
I believe you will enjoy the trip and we'll have a good day together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      It's my pleasure to be asked to act as your guide to take a short trip on next weekend．（高分句型一）And now I am writing to tell you the details as follows．
      I'll plan a wonderful and well-organized trip for you to the Guangling Lake，in the eastern suburb，not far from the downtown．（高分句型二）You will be amazed at the scenery there．In terms of the meeting time，8 o'clock on the morning of Saturday will be fine．I will be waiting for you at the school gate then．Remember not to take too many things．Just a bottle of water，some kinds of food，a cap and a pair of sunglasses will be enough．I believe you will enjoy the trip and we'll have a good day together．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to seeing you．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．