Question

20．中国民工学校状况越来越受到人们的关注，假设你是李华，你和你的同学共同对你所在的城市的民工学校进行了调查．了解情况之后你写信给英语周报，呼吁全社会关注民工学校，帮助民工子弟．
[写作内容]：
民工学校的现状1、设施简陋
2、师资缺乏
3、民工子弟热爱学习
改善民工学校现状的建议政府方面：资金的投入
学生方面：…（至少提两个建议）
呼吁全社会的人关注民工学校
[写作要求]：
1、只能使用5个句子表达所有 写作内容，信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入句子个数．
2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[参考词汇]：民工学校：migrant school
Dear Editor，
Recently，my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city．Problems do exist．
                                                     
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to improve the situation，we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools．动词不定式在句中使用的恰到好处，同时还运用了宾语从句
高分句型二
We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids，because if everyone contributes a bit，migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity．
句型一 ①In order to improve the situation 动词不定式在句中作目的状语 
            ②our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools．该句是省略的引导词that的宾语从句，同时宾语从句的谓语部分使用了重要短语：take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事
句型二 ①that the whole society can care more about migrant kids 该句是that引导的宾语从句，that只作引导词
            ②if everyone contributes a bit 该句是一个位于because后面的原因状语从句

解答 Dear Editor，
   Recently，my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city．Problems do exist．Owing to the lack of money，most migrant schools have no modern equipments，no playground，no libraries，and even not enough teachers．However，we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us．In order to improve the situation，we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools．（高分句型一）As for us，the local students，can help to collect money or donate books to them．（描述情况）
   We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids，because if everyone contributes a bit，migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity．（高分句型二）（提出建议）
Yours sincerely，
LiHua

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