题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so scared that I ran to my bed but hid myself under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thought. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.
【答案】①storm---stormy ②sudden前加a ③following---followed ④but---and ⑤bad---worse ⑥with去掉 ⑦thought---thoughts
⑧fall---fell ⑨that---what ⑩ever---never
【解析】①考查形容词。句意:在一个暴风雨的夜晚,我独自在家。修饰名词用形容词作定语,storm“暴风雨”是名词,其形容词形式是stormy表示“暴风雨的”。故将storm改为stomy。
②考查冠词。句意:突然,停电了。all of a sudden“突然”是固定短语。故在sudden前加a。
③考查非谓语动词。句意:闪电过后出现雷暴。“followed by thunderstorms”作定语从句,修饰lightening,结合句意,follow与lightning是被动关系,用过去分词表示被动关系。故将following改为followed。
④考查连词。句意:我如此害怕,跑到床上藏在毯子底下。结合句意,前后分句是顺承关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
⑤考查形容词。句意:更糟糕的是,我的父母去医院陪同我生病的祖父。to make matters worse“更糟糕的是”是固定短语,故将bad改为worse。
⑥考查介词。句意:更糟糕的是,我的父母去医院陪同我生病的祖父。accompany“陪伴;陪同”是及物动词,直接跟宾语。故去掉accompany后的with。
⑦考查名词。句意:我觉得很害怕,因为我的心里充满了恐怖的想法。thought“想法”是可数名词,结合句意,故将thought改为thoughts。
⑧考查动词。句意:过了段时间,最终我睡着了。根据语境可知,文章讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。故将fall改为fell。
⑨考查连词。句意:早饭时,我告示父母我昨天晚上看到的。“what I had seen”是宾语从句,从句缺乏宾语,what引导宾语从句,从句中作主语、宾语或者表语,that引导宾语从句,无词义,不做成分,仅起引导作用。故将that改为what。
⑩考查副词。句意:我的父母也害怕,许诺他们将再也不会独自留我在家。根据句意,故把ever改为never。