Question

假如你是李华，某校高三年级学生，你想给曾经教过你的外教Alan写一封邮件请教在英语学习上遇到的一些问题。主要内容包括：

英语成绩不理想；?? 2。恐难进心仪大学；3。花时多，收效少

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要求：1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，行文通畅；2. 词数：120左右

Dear Alan,

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Best wishes

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Alan,

Recently I’m faced with some difficulty in learning English which has been bothering me continuously. Hardly have I seen any progress in my English study even though I have spent quite a lot of time in English every day. No matter how hard I try, I would never get good results in the exams. I began to realize how serious the situation would be. I feel so worried that I always blame myself for it. To improve the situation, I have discussed it with some of my teachers and classmates. They have done their best to help me, but I am still not confident. Nowadays, it has even become such a headache for me that being admitted to my dream university seems impossible. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Thank you.

Best wishes,

Yours, sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，你的外教Alan写一封邮件请教在英语学习上遇到的一些问题。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但是不是很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。而且要适当拓展，丰富内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言流畅，句式变化多样：Recently I’m faced with some difficulty in learning English which has been bothering me continuously. 这句话用了定语从句。Hardly have I seen any progress in my English study even though I have spent quite a lot of time in English every day.这句话用了倒装句， No matter how hard I try, I would never get good results in the exams. 这句话用了让步状语从句， I feel so worried that I always blame myself for it. 这句话用了so…that…句型，To improve the situation, I have discussed it with some of my teachers and classmates. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语， Nowadays, it has even become such a headache for me that being admitted to my dream university seems impossible.这句话用了it做形式主语， I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. 这句话用了it做形式宾语。

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