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7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last summer holiday，I went to a summer camp，there I had some friends already．I did many interested things with these friends，having funs．One day，I saw a boy，one I had previous known from one of my basketball teams．Stood by himself，he said，"I'm all alone．"I happened to be a few feet from him and heard what he had said，but I went up to him and tapped him on shoulder．"We are not alone； I'm your friend，"I said．Unfortunately，the boy didn't recognize me at first．It took him a while to figure out of that I was his teammate．Since then，though，we had hung out and become good friends．

分析 文章大意：去年暑假，我去参加夏令营，那里有我的一些朋友．有一天，我看到一个男孩，以前是在我的一个篮球队里认识的，但起初男孩没有认出我，过来一会儿才想起．之后我们成了好朋友．

解答 Last summer holiday，I went to a summer camp，there I had some friends already．
                                                                          where
I did many interested things with these friends，having funs．One day，I saw a boy，
                 interesting                                                 fun
one I had previous known from one of my basketball teams．Stood by himself，
               previously                                                          Standing
he said，"I'm all alone．"I happened to be a few feet from him and heard what he had said，

but I went up to him and tapped him on∧shoulder．"We are not alone； I'm your friend，"
and/so                                                the               You
I said．Unfortunately，the boy didn't recognize me at first．It took him a while to 

figure out of that I was his teammate．Since then，though，we had hung out and become good friends．
              去掉of                                                   去掉though    have
详解
1．there改为where，考查定语从句．此处是where引导的非限定性定语从句，先行词是a summer camp，指地点，从句中缺少地点状语，所以用where来引导，故把there改为where．
2．interested改为 interesting考查形容词． 以ed结尾的形容词表示"人…的"，修饰人；：以ing结尾的形容词表示"令人…的"，修饰物，故把interested改为interesting．
3．funs  fun，考查名词单复数． fun作抽象名词，表示"乐趣"时是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把funs改为fun．
4．previous改为previously．考查副词． 修饰动词known用副词，故把previous改为previously．
5．Stood改为Standing．考查非谓语动词． 分析句子结构可知此处是非谓语动词，stand与主语he之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，表示主动，应该用现在分词作状语，故把Stood改为Standing．
6．but改为and或so．考查连词． 此处是说恰巧我离他几步远，（所以）我走近他，拍拍他的肩膀，此处表示动作的承接而不是转折，也可以表结果，故把but改为and或so．
7．shoulder前加the，考查冠词．表示身体的某一个部位接受外来的动作时，要在身体部位前加定冠词the，故在shoulder前加the．
8．We改为You．考查人称代词． 我对他说"你并不孤单，我是你的朋友"，故把We改为You．
9．though去掉．考查句意理解． 此处是说从那时起，我们就一起闲逛并成为好朋友，由句意可知此处不表示让步关系，though多余，故把though去掉．
10．去掉of，考查短语搭配，figure out 是及物动词词组，后面不需加of．
11．had 改为have．考查时态． 由时间状语"Since then"判断出此处用现在完成时，故把had改为have

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