题目内容
17.假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom来信询问中国的餐桌礼仪,请就此写一封100词左右的信向他介绍,要点如下:1.客人和年长者先坐,他们开始吃其他人才能吃;
2.桌上有许多菜,供人们共享;
3.吃完后,要向主人表示感谢…
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文.根据题目中的"假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom来信询问中国的餐桌礼仪,请就此写一封100词左右的信向他介绍"可知用第一人称来进行写作,以一般现在时态为主.文章主要分成三部分:一 表明写作目的;二 介绍中国的餐桌礼仪;三 表达愿望.
高分句型:
1.Other people should not begin eating until (引导时间状语从句,和not呼应,表示"直到…才")the guests and the seniors start.
直到客人和长者开始用餐,其他人才可以拿筷子.
2.While eating(doing做状语,eat和主语Chinese hosts 是主动关系) Chinese hosts usually take(谓语动词) good care of their guests and often use (并列的谓语动词)serving chopsticks or spoons to add food to guests'plates
在就餐的时候,中国的主人通常会照顾客人,会用公共筷子或调羹来为客人夹菜.
解答 Dear Tom,
I'm very glad to hear from you.You said you wanted to learn some Chinese table manners.Now let me tell you something(点题,表明写作目的).
Before a meal,guests and seniors are seated first.Other people should not begin eating until the guests and the seniors start(高分句型一).Unlike Westerners,the Chinese usually put many dishes on the table and everybody shares them together.While eating Chinese hosts usually take good care of their guests and often use serving chopsticks or spoons to add food to guests'plates(高分句型二).After the meal,guests should express their thanks to hosts and their satisfaction with the delicious meal.In short,when in China do as the Chinese do(介绍中国的餐桌礼仪).
I hope you will find my information useful(表达愿望).
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 非谓语动词是高中语法的重点,所以在写作时用上,可以为作文添彩,例如非谓语动词做定语或状语是经常可以利用的.
1.There is a bird singing in the tree.(doing做定语)
2.While watching TV,he ofen does some exercise.(doing做状语)
A. | in hand | B. | in use | C. | in place | D. | in time |