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Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey ¨C ¡°To whom do you go when in trouble?¡± The results are as follows.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming


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Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student£®Recently we have carried out a survey ¡ª ¡°To whom do you go when in trouble?¡± The results are as follows£®
Dear Editor,
I am a Senior Three student£®Recently we have carried out a survey¡ª¡°To whom do you go when in trouble?¡± The main findings are as follows£®
61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble and want to confide, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other£®Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to£®They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences£®Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don¡¯t share their troubles at all£®They say that their troubles are none of others¡¯ business£®Others find it hard to converse with others£®
(It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a small example£®However, some general comments can be made£®) It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives£®  Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming

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