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3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
    Though great progress has made in science these years,there are still many people living in poor conditions.They make their lives by collecting and selling used thing.Their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion.A president of a developing country once said;"It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to'produce'child without limit."Although this few words sound simple enough,they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

分析 本文作者主要分析了在科技迅猛发展的今天,仍然还存在贫困人口的原因(即在于人口数量的急剧增加).

解答 Though great progress has∧made in science these years,there are still
many people living in poor conditions.They make theirlivesby collecting
and selling usedthing.Their children cannot go to school because they have
not enough money to send their children to there.Why∧you think so many
people still suffer from poverty now?The answer liesonthe population explosion.
A president of a developing country once said;"It isuswho are to blame for the
poverty because we used to'produce'child without limit."Although this few words
sound simple enough,they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population
explosion.
详解:
1.has后加been   考查语态   根据时间状语"these years"可知,此处应使用现在完成时;由于动词do与主语progress是被动关系,故此处应使用现在完成时态的被动语态;故在has后加been.
2.lives改为living 考查固定搭配    make one's living意为:谋生,故用living.
3.thing改为things 考查名词的单复数   此处指的是:一些用过的东西,故用复数名词things.
4.去掉to   考查介词   由于there是副词,其前不能再加介词;故去掉to.
5.Why后加 do 考查助动词    根据时间状语"now"可知,本句应使用一般现在时;由于此处用在特殊疑问词why之后,主语you之前,构成的是特殊疑问句;故用助动词do.
6.on改为in 固定搭配     lie in意为:在于…;故用in.
7.us改为we 考查强调句   本句符合强调句"It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子的其他成分"这一结构,强调的是句子的主语,故用we.
8.child改为children 考查固定词组    produce children生育子女,故用children.
9.this改为these 考查指示代词   此处用来修饰复数名词words,指的是这几个字,故用these.
10.clear改为clearly 考查副词    此处用来修饰动词词组point out,故用副词clearly.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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