Question

假如你叫李明，你的一位美国笔友Peter要来厦门旅游，他想先请你 

向他简单地介绍一下厦门的大致情况。现在，请你给他发一封电子邮件，    

邮件必须包括如下内容：

1. 厦门位于福建东南方向, 是福建省第四大岛屿，是中国最干净的城市， 

有“海上花园”之称。

2. 厦门始建于1394年，宋朝初期，历史悠久。20世纪80年代初又被宣

布为经济特区。

3. 厦门气候宜人，冬暖夏凉，特色小吃众多

4. 著名的鼓浪屿岛、动物园、环岛路和南普陀寺等每年吸引着众多国内

外游客

注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，使文章连贯   2. 词数120左右

3. 文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数

4. 文字内容书写不得超出框外

参考词汇：1.宋朝：Song dynasty 2.宣布：declare 3.经济特区：Special Economic Zone

4.鼓浪屿：Gulang island 5.环岛路Huandao Road 6.南普陀寺South Putuo Temple

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear that ypu will come to Xiamen for a visit. As you know, Xiamen is a beautiful  city, which is located in Southeast of Fujian province. It is considered as the cleanest city in China .Therefore, people call Xiamen "the garden on the sea" .It is the fourth largest city in China. Xiamen has a long hitory. It was first founded in 1394 at the beginning of the Song dynasty and was declared one of China’s first Special Economic Zones in the early 1980’s. Xiamen has a pleasand climate, which is warm in winter,cool in summer. In Xiamen you also can eat a lot of special delicious food. What’s more, the famous Gulang island, as well as South Putuo Temple and zoo attract many visitors from home and abroad every year. I hope you will have a good time during your stay in Xiamen.

I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.          

Your friend,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文属于提纲里作文中常见的介绍人物和地方的短文。文章的要点都已经给出，考生只需要做适当的串联，用合适的连接词把这些分开的要点连接词起来如besides, what’s more等。本文中可以使用倒装句，把表示地点的介词短语提起，后面使用全部倒装。同时变化使用不同的句式，让文章更富有变化，提升文章的档次。

考点：考查提纲类短文的写作。

点评：对于提纲类短文最重要的是不要遗漏要点，所有的要点要全面覆盖，在写作的时候要使用合适的连接词和高级句型让文章更流畅更有层次。