Question

假如你是李平，今年暑假去打工, 参加社会实践活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文“An Unforgettable Experience”，以发表在校刊上。

工作地点	一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店
工作时间	四个星期，每天8小时
工作情况	当保洁员（cleaner）,工作辛苦且枯燥, 每天要起早贪黑地工作，差点中途放弃
你的体会	遇到了一些没预料到的困难，认识到了劳动（labor）的意义……

注意：1. 必须使用第一人称;

2. 不要逐句翻译，可适当扩展，总词数120左右;

3. 要求字迹工整，卷面整洁。

An Unforgettable Experience

                                                                

                                                                

                                                                

                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

An Unforgettable Experience

During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.

The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

Although I met with a lot of difficulty in the work, it helped me understand better what labor means. I think it is really a successful experience.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。