Question

【题目】请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。

China is considered the world’s largest tobacco producer and consumer. Smoking remains a common scene in some public places.

要求：(1)就此材料发表你的感想； (2)应紧扣材料、有明确的观点； (3)在答题卡上作答。

Answer 1

【答案】

As is mentioned in the material, we are confronted with a problem that there are still many people smoking in public places in China.

From my perspective, smoking in public places should be banned. For one thing, smoking in public places can do more harm to non-smokers, which lead to many incurable diseases. For another thing, it will pollute our environment by giving off poisonous chemicals. Never will we build and enjoy a beautiful and harmonious country unless we prohibit smoking in public places. Remember everybody is responsible for it.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语For one thing一方面；For another thing再者；For one thing, smoking in public places can do more harm to non-smokers, which lead to many incurable diseases.这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句；Never will we build and enjoy a beautiful and harmonious country unless we prohibit smoking in public places.这个句子中运用了否定词放在句首，用部分倒装；