Question

假设你是某中学的学生会生活部的部长, Lucy。你要代表学生给校长反映对学校食堂的看法，并提出建议

满意之处：1.提供很多种类的食物； 2.饭菜价格便宜，味道可口； 3.食堂环境已经改善

不满意之处：1.食物分量不足； 2.食堂的座位不够，一些学生吃饭时没有座位。

建议：希望学校会考虑增添些座位；改进饭菜的质量；改善服务

要求： 1. 注意使用建议信的文体和委婉句式.

       2. 写作时,要包括所列的要点,但不要逐句翻译.

       3．信的开头和结尾已经写出。           

4.  作文的字数在120左右。       

 词汇：  食堂 canteen  改善improve  质量quality

Dear Headmaster,

    I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. .                               

 

Yours sincerely,

Lucy

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,

     I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. I wonder if you will not mind me writing to ask if you have thought about the following things. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.

     Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of service they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well. Some students can not find the seats when eating.

     Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.

                                                                     

 Yours,

Lucy

解析:

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