Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“One thing I’m proud of” 为题，用英语写一篇100--- 120 个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：

1 记述事情经过；

2 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。

注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

One thing I’m proud of

Answer 1

【答案】

I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”

【解析】

试题分析：请以“One thing I’m proud of” 为题，用英语写一篇100--- 120 个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1. 记述事情经过；2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入总词数。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. 宾语从句在句中体现；Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.过去分词作状语；Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.用until引导时间状语从句；At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.巧妙使用最高级；I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.原因状语从句和宾语从句完美结合；It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”句中运用比较级，并使用谚语收尾，恰到好处。