题目内容
绵阳拥挤的道路给人们带来不便,引发社会广泛热议。是否应该拥有私家车,有人赞成,有人反对。请你以Whether or not--Owning a private car为题,用英语论述人们的观点,并给出你自己的观点。
字数:120词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Whether or not--Owning a private car
Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.
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Whether or not--Owning a private car
Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.
Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort. For example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.
However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. What’s more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem.
Personally, I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求以“Whether or not--Owning a private car”为题,就是否应该拥有私家车,用英语论述人们的观点,并给出自己的观点。词数在120词左右,开头不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:范文涵盖了所有的写作要点,进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:宾语从句①that there are many advantages of owning a private car,②that as more and more cars run in the street...;地点状语从句where they like;非谓语动词polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people等,语法知识运用娴熟,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用and, however, what’s more, in fact, personally等词和短语来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用了for example, no longer, rely on, enjoy oneself, make trips to, on the weekends, object to, give off, in fact, contribute to, rather than等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。
考点:话题作文
It’s natural to greet friends with a smile and a wave. ___【小题1】____ But what happens if your face and body send mixed messages? Would someone be more likely to believe the look on your face or the way you hold your body?
Scientists have recently tackled these questions. They found that when a person is looking at your face, she might not believe what she sees of your body language doesn’t match the feeling that your face shows. ___【小题2】____ Previously, they had found that the tone of a person’s voice can be more important than the words that are spoken. For example, most people tend not to believe a person who says in a flat voice, “I’m so excited.”
When it came to emotions conveyed by facial expressions and body language, most scientists suspected that the face was more important. To test if this was true, psychologists from the Netherlands and Boston showed people a number of pictures of isolated(孤立的) faces and isolated bodies(with faces blurred out (模糊的))that showed anger or fear. 【小题3】____
An angry face had low eyebrows and tight lips. A scared face had high eyebrow and a slightly open mouth. 【小题4】___ A scared body had arms forward and shoulders square, as if ready to defend.
These results told the researchers that mixed signals can confuse people. Even when people pay attention to the face, body language subtly(微妙地) influences which emotion they read.
___ 【小题5】____And if you want to be understood, it helps to avoid sending mixed messages.
A.Scientists feel new to study the mixed message that confuses people. |
B.When you do this, your face and body work together to show your friends that you’re happy to see them. |
C. Studying such mixed messages is nothing new for scientists.. |
D.They also showed pictures in which angry or scared faces were paired with angry or scared bodies |
F.So, your body language is important for telling people how you feel.
G.An angry body had arms back and shoulders at an angle, as if ready to fight.