Question

【题目】假设你是李华。你的美国好友John来信说自从上高中后，身体素质下降了，而且患有肥胖症，他对此很是担心。请你用英语给John写一封回信，主要内容包括：
1）他身体素质下降和肥胖的原因：作业多，运动少，做家务少，熬夜玩手机，饮食不健康；
2）改善的方法和建议，少玩手机，保证充足睡眠，多运动，均衡饮食。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
肥胖症obesity
Dear John,

Your faithfully,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I am sorry to hear that you are worried about the decline of your health condition and suffering from obesity. As far as I know, all your worries may come from these reasons as follow. And there are some suggestions for you.

One of the reasons could be that you have such a heavy load in study since high school that you seldom take physical exercise or do labor work like housework. What's more, you stay up too late to chat online and play cellphone games. The worst of all is that you eat too much junk food which is rich in sugar and oil.

To solve the problem, I advise that you should not spend so much time on your cellphone in order to have enough sleep and that you should do sports at least 3 times a week. Besides, you'd better have a balanced diet which includes more fruits and vegetables and refuse junk food.

I sincerely hope you can be in a better health condition. Best wishes!

Your faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给美国好友John写一封信，写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。书信类作文的主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。要写好这篇短文，一般来讲需分四个步骤：1、确定文章体裁 写作前，首先认真审查，看文章题目要求是哪种文体，书面通知，日记，书信，还是看图写话，不同的文体有不同的格式。2、选择准确的词汇和短语。确定文体后，要把短文的内容提示用准确的词汇短语写出来，可以避免遗漏要点。本文涉及三个要点1）I am sorry to hear that；2）come from these reasons as follow3）To solve the problem,3、连词成句将已选好的单词和短语根据题目的提示用适当的连词连成句子，注意短文的人称、时态、动词变形、名词复数是否运用正确。4、检查语言短文写完后，一定要反复研读，注意修改文章出现的语法错误，如人称用错，时态，动词及习语搭配等等错误。