Question

下表是对某中学高二某班50个学生健康问题的调查表。请根据表格内容，综述学生当前存在的健康问题，并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。

问题类型	学习焦虑	逆反心理	缺乏交往	睡眠不足	缺乏锻炼	视力不佳
人数	35	20	15	40	25	35
比例	70%	40%	30%	80%	50%	70%

注意：1. 词数：120左右  2．参考词汇：学习焦虑learning anxiety

3．首句已给，不计入总词数。

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally,                                              ______ 

                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxiety as well as poor eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claim not to have enough communication with others.

As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.

【解析】本文是一份调查表，在审题的时候，一定要注意本文的时态，调查报告一般使用现在时。同上注意分数百分数的表达法，在写作的时候要注意使用高级词汇和句型如倒装句，强调句等。也要使用合适的连接词如As far as I am concerned，Therefore等让文章更有条理。