下表是对某中学高二某班50个学生健康问题的调查表.请根据表格内容.综述学生当前存在的健康问题.并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议. 问题类型学习焦虑逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏锻炼视力不佳人数 35 20 15 40 25 35 比例 70% 40% 30% 80% 50% 70% 注意:1. 词数:120左右 2．参� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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下表是对某中学高二某班50个学生健康问题的调查表。请根据表格内容，综述学生当前存在的健康问题，并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。

问题类型	学习焦虑	逆反心理	缺乏交往	睡眠不足	缺乏锻炼	视力不佳
人数	35	20	15	40	25	35
比例	70%	40%	30%	80%	50%	70%

注意：1. 词数：120左右 2．参考词汇：学习焦虑learning anxiety

3．首句已给，不计入总词数。

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, ______

【答案】

As is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxiety as well as poor eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers. Still fewer claim not to have enough communication with others.

As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life.

【解析】本文是一份调查表，在审题的时候，一定要注意本文的时态，调查报告一般使用现在时。同上注意分数百分数的表达法，在写作的时候要注意使用高级词汇和句型如倒装句，强调句等。也要使用合适的连接词如As far as I am concerned，Therefore等让文章更有条理。