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10．Following a four-day meeting of the Communist Party of China Central Committee in Beijing，the central government announces that China allows two children for every couple．
The People's Congress at provincial level or its standing committee has revised local regulations or made new ones，with the support and guidance of the National Health and Family Planning Commission，Jiang said．"The number of new births will definitely increase in the coming years and we estimate that the peak will be over 20 million newborn babies，"said Wang Pei'an，vice-minister of the National Health and Family Planning Commission．
At present，about 60 percent of China's child-bearing women are over 35years old，which means an increase of'elderly'mothers will be witnessed in China in the next few years，Wang said in a news release on Friday．
"It's safe to say that the two-child policy won't bring huge pressure on food security and basic public services，such as health，education and employment，"Wang said．He estimated that another 30 million working people aged between 15 and 59 will be added by 2050．"It will benefit economic growth in the long term，"Wang added．
【写作内容】1．用约30个单词写出上文概要．
2．用约120个单词就"二胎政策"这一话题谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你同意你父母亲生二胎吗？表明你的态度并说明理由（至少2点）；
（2）试分析中国实行二胎政策的好处．（至少两点）
参考词汇：兄弟姐妹：sibling．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇议论文，就时下最流行的话题"二胎"谈谈自己的看法．时态确定为一般现在时．在审题时需注意所提供要点，先表明自己的态度及理由，说明自己支持生二胎或者反对的具体理由；再分析试行二胎的好处，有条理的分点描述．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：have positive effects on 对…有积极影响；dream about 梦想；in addition 另外；take care of 照顾；above all首先；besides另外；share joys and sorrows同甘共苦
    The passage tells us the latest release of the two-child policy and analyzes its prospect and the positive effects it may have on China．（高分句型一）
    On a personal note，the long-awaited move immediately excited me，because having a sibling is what I have been dreaming about．（高分句型二）
  As is mentioned in the passage，the two-child policy is bound to increase the fertility rate and control the aging population．（高分句型三）

解答 The passage tells us the latest release of the two-child policy and analyzes its prospect and the positive effects it may have on China．（高分句型一）
    On a personal note，the long-awaited move immediately excited me，because having a sibling is what I have been dreaming about．（高分句型二）With a sibling around，never will I feel lonely．In addition，I can shoulder part of the responsibility to take care of the baby，and thus learn to take care of others．Above all，I can share my joys and sorrows with another family member．
    In the same way，the new policy means much more than giving children．It is expected to help to change China's negative population trends．As is mentioned in the passage，the two-child policy is bound to increase the fertility rate and control the aging population．（高分句型三）Besides，it will also help to solve an imbalance between boys and girls．

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