Question

在我们的生活和学习中，与人合作是非常重要的。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Cooperate with others”的英文演讲稿。请写在答题纸相应横线上。

为何与人合作	可以高效地完成任务； 可以节省时间和精力； 可以从合作者身上学到很多。
与谁合作	与喜欢的人合作	心情愉快，一起分享工作中的快乐和痛苦。
与不喜欢的人 合作	能挑战自己与他人相处的能力。此外，关注工作比关注合作者本人更重要。日久，也许会发现他是一个很好相处的人。
怎样做一个好的合作者	请你发表自己的观点……（至少2点看法）

注意：

1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数150左右。

参考词汇：合作者 partner       高效地efficiently

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.

                                                                                    

                                                                               

                                                                                      

                                                                                

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

Thank you for your listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.

In our daily life and study, if we want to accomplish our work efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others. Cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.

When we cooperate with someone we like, we will feel very happy. We can share our pleasure（joys）and sadness（sorrows）with him. But it challenges us to get along with others to cooperate with someone we dislike（hate）. Besides/Moreover/What’s more, we should focus on our work, instead of（rather than）our partners. Perhaps in working together with him for a long time, we’ll learn（find out）that he is a man to get along well with.

How can we become a good partner? In my opinion, we should try to listen to others. If they make mistakes, we also try to point them out. Thirdly, we mustn’t embarrass others to make them in unfavorable position.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文属于演讲类文体，对于这类作文需要学生写的尽量引人入胜，不可机械的翻译，可以通过适当的设问句来引起听众的注意力，在写作中注意使用平时积累的“起承转合”的连词，使用万能句型造句，最后提出自己的看法。提建议时可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分开阐述，以显得层次分明。

考点：议论文

点评：对于作文的写作平时学习时多进行作文模板的记忆，万能句型的积累，高中作文写作，要注意在写作之前，首先对题目进行认真的审清，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯，遇到专有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定语从句，强调唯一性。平时的英语作文就可以多尝试使用这些表达，考试时才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。